AbigailMcintosh
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- Nov 12, 2011
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My story is going to take place on a fiction island.
I would love information, good or bad and how to make it better.
This is the description;
Amelia is set to marry Prince Zjuch [ZOO-U-CH], but the problem is she isn't marrying him for love; no she's marrying him to help out her kingdom, for that's what princess were born to do right? Well she thinks it's wrong, so when the stunning but dangerous Pirate Lark kidnapps her and takes her on a wild sail around the sea's- she isn't exacly begging to go home.
Lark wants to follow in his late fathers footsteps and to be able to do that he must be the most noturious pirate that ever sailed Gervuie [GER-VAY-ES]. And with Amelia's help he'll be sure to get that title and more.
But what is more important in life; titles or friendship.
*The seas have never been so dangerous.
I would love information, good or bad and how to make it better.
This is the description;
Amelia is set to marry Prince Zjuch [ZOO-U-CH], but the problem is she isn't marrying him for love; no she's marrying him to help out her kingdom, for that's what princess were born to do right? Well she thinks it's wrong, so when the stunning but dangerous Pirate Lark kidnapps her and takes her on a wild sail around the sea's- she isn't exacly begging to go home.
Lark wants to follow in his late fathers footsteps and to be able to do that he must be the most noturious pirate that ever sailed Gervuie [GER-VAY-ES]. And with Amelia's help he'll be sure to get that title and more.
But what is more important in life; titles or friendship.
*The seas have never been so dangerous.