After School Troubles Rap?

[pimpizzles]

Here's my rap i wrote about my after school trouble blues
let me know what ya think...

I'm an instigator
Lack of organization ~ Procrastinator
Yet i can rap, I rock, and always on a roll
Catch me wanderin the halls no pass goin 4 a stroll

Always get in trouble for my bad intentions
Still never served one of my after school detentions
Assigned to I.S.S with my buddy mississippy
Try to plead my case like a protestin hippie

Gettin no sympathy from administration
Slap on the wrist back on double secret probation
Swears so hard next time they'll throw the book
Case of mistaken identity, not a criminal like nixon~"I am not a crook"

 

[illuminate]

yo man that's freakin good bro no joke real good here is a

TIP...ive noticed this a lot in MOST songs if u dont cuss ppl that listen to you will take you more seriously and enjoy the song more in a way trust me on this