AshleyPowell
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- Jun 17, 2010
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I am an author and writing a thriller novel which is very interesting. I am at the middle of it and it is based on a woman whose family was killed by a man and she takes on revenge later on. I am at a sequence where the woman who is the main character has to kidnap a kid from the kid's home to take him hostage. The kid is very dear to the man from whom she has to take revenge. The boy is around 5-6 yrs old. I am finding it hard ,how to plan the entire kidnapping as it has to be interesting showing the woman's vengeance. The boy is sleeping in his room and the man is sleeping in another room. The woman breaks into the house at night. Now, i am confused deciding the attire of the lady. Should it be :-
1. masked with black leather gloves.
2. or normal dress without any dangerous looking attire.
Now, how should she approach the kidnapping? How should she take the kid away without waking the man up who is asleep in another room. How can she prevent the kid from screaming ? I just cant combine the entire scene so that it looks thrilling. What all things should the woman use ? For eg - chloroform or something like that to make the kid unconscious. Pls help me in writing this scene. Thanks in advance.
1. masked with black leather gloves.
2. or normal dress without any dangerous looking attire.
Now, how should she approach the kidnapping? How should she take the kid away without waking the man up who is asleep in another room. How can she prevent the kid from screaming ? I just cant combine the entire scene so that it looks thrilling. What all things should the woman use ? For eg - chloroform or something like that to make the kid unconscious. Pls help me in writing this scene. Thanks in advance.