http://Sphinx-of-Akhenaten.deviantart.com/art/Theo-s-Past-Draft-136733349
It's a rather long blurb, but any critique on it? Other than things that'll be caught when I go through and Edit it for a second draft?
And not just stylistically, but the subject matter too.
It's a rather long blurb, but any critique on it? Other than things that'll be caught when I go through and Edit it for a second draft?
And not just stylistically, but the subject matter too.