Are all Love poems full of cliches?

[HPeeeeyestothesky]

When I say I Love You
does it say enough
can you feel, what you are in me
and see my eyes, as I tilt my head
silently peering to your soul
one grin from a smile
sly lips not quite there
but coming in closer to show
with no need to tell

in those words we find breath
only to be left breathless

 

[PJdance]

Apparently so...

"When I say I Love You
does it say enough" (gag)

"peering to your soul" (gag)

"sly lips" (gag)

"can you feel, what you are in me" (gag)


No seriously it's fine (gag), no really honestly it's fine, it's like Shakespeare in modern times sorta, or Mary Oliver without all the crazy geese.