you know, stories like little women, pride and prejudice (not that i'm comparing my work to any of those geniuses.).
but i want to write a fictitious novel about a rebellious girl, by the name of Bernadette.her mother is a really proper lady, and Bernadette never really liked being proper.she'd rather go traveling with her father(her father was an avid traveler and was gone for months at a stretch).one day her father returned for christmas(he never usually does), but he left abruptly after a fight with Bernadette's mother.bernadette was upset but she cheered up when she heard her mother was pregnant.she began to wish ardently for a brother,but nine months later, her mother dies while giving birth and she entrusts Bernadette with her DAUGHTER Lacey Belle.Bernadette's father was unable to come for the funeral due to some complications and Bernadette and Lacey were put under Mrs Demitri's care.Mrs Demitri was not really bad, but weak-minded. so before Bernadette's 18th birthday, the age when Bernadette was old enough to inherit the estate, Mrs Demitri sends Bernadette and her sister to France under the pretence of sending her to her cousins(she does have cousins in France, but they live in a really(let me put it like this) hard to find place. i guess your kinda bored so i'll end it here.oh, and she finds a secret about her father that devastates her.
how does it sound? any remark or advice is appreciated... and thanks for reading a really long question!!!
but i want to write a fictitious novel about a rebellious girl, by the name of Bernadette.her mother is a really proper lady, and Bernadette never really liked being proper.she'd rather go traveling with her father(her father was an avid traveler and was gone for months at a stretch).one day her father returned for christmas(he never usually does), but he left abruptly after a fight with Bernadette's mother.bernadette was upset but she cheered up when she heard her mother was pregnant.she began to wish ardently for a brother,but nine months later, her mother dies while giving birth and she entrusts Bernadette with her DAUGHTER Lacey Belle.Bernadette's father was unable to come for the funeral due to some complications and Bernadette and Lacey were put under Mrs Demitri's care.Mrs Demitri was not really bad, but weak-minded. so before Bernadette's 18th birthday, the age when Bernadette was old enough to inherit the estate, Mrs Demitri sends Bernadette and her sister to France under the pretence of sending her to her cousins(she does have cousins in France, but they live in a really(let me put it like this) hard to find place. i guess your kinda bored so i'll end it here.oh, and she finds a secret about her father that devastates her.
how does it sound? any remark or advice is appreciated... and thanks for reading a really long question!!!