Books and Authors: What do you think of this introduction for my forum?

mRitsukaLovelessm

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Welcome to Cid’s airship, and please remember to wipe your feet. This airship can prove you much transportation and time to relax. Now sit down, no not there… over in that seat. Relax, and talk to me. And if you haven’t guessed already, you just stepped into a chatting forum; for all Final Fantasy fans on this beloved spot, all viewers are welcomed.

Should I add some more? ^_^;
I'm going to describe the Airship as the first comment. Any tips for describing?
Okay, but it's pretty obvious I'm speaking to them.
I just added 'So please stop by every one and a while. ;)', Do that make it seem complete?
 
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