Can some one check my rant on snickers for a english test?

awesomeness

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this is only half of it (GCSE BTW)
It's about snickers
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAPXGuRIXsA
to watch the advert

I just can’t stand that snickers bar advert with that commando creep who stalks people in his tank and demands them to get some nuts. You get some nuts you psychopathic chocolate giver! This egotistical mad man has all ready ridiculed the army by wearing their uniform in a nonchalant fashion, all lover of chocolate and even the local stalkers have decided to take up a new career path.

I mean who does that mow hawed, small brained, imbecile think he is? The nut guru! The only thing he knows about nuts is how to throw them at people, and as if throwing isn't enough he yells at them too. How’s that for persuasive advertisement, oh yes you have truly enticed me by pelting me with snicker and telling me to quit my jibber jabber. I really want to buy a bar now!

I’ve realised the adverts are actually targeted at men, are women not nutty enough for you. I find this infuriating and degrading and I can’t see what women are missing.
 
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