Can someone help me with an introduction paragraph?

Ryan

Active member
well i'm doing an essay about the similarities and differences on Klondike Gold Rush and the California Gold Rush. I have the body and conclusion all planned out, but it's the introduction paragraph hurting it.
any tips would help me very much. many thanks!
 

willeizquierdo

New member
It's always good to start an intro essay paragraph by asking a question, stating either what are the similarities and or difference would also be important points to make in your intro paragraph, hope this helps!
 

willeizquierdo

New member
It's always good to start an intro essay paragraph by asking a question, stating either what are the similarities and or difference would also be important points to make in your intro paragraph, hope this helps!
 

willeizquierdo

New member
It's always good to start an intro essay paragraph by asking a question, stating either what are the similarities and or difference would also be important points to make in your intro paragraph, hope this helps!
 
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