(Lilet and jean are at a club someone steals jean's purse and slips a card inside it. she finds it later)
“Look Lilet, someone stole my purse. I found it but someone slipped this card in it.
Lilet was surprised someone stole her clutch. “Where did you find your purse?”
“Jacob found it, you know the guy I was standing next to?”
Her eyes went to the doors. “That’s weird, maybe Jacob did it?”
“I know, that’s what I thought.” Replied Jean.
Lilet didn’t want to be the bad guy but she felt like her older sister. “Did you get his number, I don’t think you should talk to that guy.”
Jean stared at the card. “Your right, he looks nice and everything but he might be a player or a liar.” She said.
“Are you going to call that number on that card?” Lilet asked laughing.
“I need a driver to take me to the cemetery. I don’t kno-”
“Be careful, I’m sorry I can’t go with you tomorrow and I’m sorry my car is getting fixed.”
She sighed. “No Lilet it’s fine, I think I’ll call. It’s my only choice.”
“But you don’t know wha-”
“Lilet . . . I have to go to the cemetery tomorrow.”
“Okay, I get it.” She huffed.
(I asked this before and I rewrote it. rewrite it and win or give me any TIPS) IF U DONT WANT TO REWRITE IT DONT SAY ANYTHING.
-does this sound real?
“Look Lilet, someone stole my purse. I found it but someone slipped this card in it.
Lilet was surprised someone stole her clutch. “Where did you find your purse?”
“Jacob found it, you know the guy I was standing next to?”
Her eyes went to the doors. “That’s weird, maybe Jacob did it?”
“I know, that’s what I thought.” Replied Jean.
Lilet didn’t want to be the bad guy but she felt like her older sister. “Did you get his number, I don’t think you should talk to that guy.”
Jean stared at the card. “Your right, he looks nice and everything but he might be a player or a liar.” She said.
“Are you going to call that number on that card?” Lilet asked laughing.
“I need a driver to take me to the cemetery. I don’t kno-”
“Be careful, I’m sorry I can’t go with you tomorrow and I’m sorry my car is getting fixed.”
She sighed. “No Lilet it’s fine, I think I’ll call. It’s my only choice.”
“But you don’t know wha-”
“Lilet . . . I have to go to the cemetery tomorrow.”
“Okay, I get it.” She huffed.
(I asked this before and I rewrote it. rewrite it and win or give me any TIPS) IF U DONT WANT TO REWRITE IT DONT SAY ANYTHING.
-does this sound real?