Can you Edit my introduction/ thesis for my essay if you can.?

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“Vimy Ridge was a nation building experience, because the Canadians made an incredible four day victory by taking over Vimy Ridge, and also Vimy Ridge was Canada’s greatest World War 1 victory. Secondly “the great war was also Canada’s war of independence”, because of the of Canada’s participation in the World War 1.
 
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