can you please give me your feedback on this poem?

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Be cautious of life’s little games,
For life is always well defined,
Cross the lines,
But only to the extent,
Your heart can sustain,
For balance is everything,
Search for the righteous path,
And your soul will be faultless,
Life defines you by your deeds,
Not your accomplishments,
Having integrity is nothing,
If one cannot uphold it,
And the way the ball bounces,
Is never in your hands,
For those who comprehend life’s games,
Be cautious,
Knowing too much,
Isn’t always celebrated,
The power isn’t always in your hands.


I would like to have to your feedback .. not rude comments. Thank You
 
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