Can you PRETTY PLEASE check the following for grammatical errors? Ten points to

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most hehlpful answer. Thanks? I'm making a resume for somebody and need help proofreading it because english is my second language. Please correct any mistakes you see!! thanks.


OBJECTIVE

To obtain a challenging position where I may apply skills and abilities and my interest in working with people.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS

•A responsible individual who enjoys working in a people-oriented environment.
•Able to work effectively as a team member as well as independently.
•Follows directions well and likes the challenge of learning new skills.
•Hardworking, dedicated and conscientious.
• Provides courteous, efficient, and accurate customer service.
SELECTED WORK EXPERIENCE

Island City Baking Company Inc., Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
Delivery Driver (September/2007- Present)
Duties: Responsible for the prompt delivery of bread and baked goods and loading and unloading goods.

P.M. Wood Kraft Ltd., Surrey, British Columbia, Canada
Delivery Driver (August/ 2005 – September/2007)
Duties: Delivered various items and products and loaded and unloaded goods.

Marquise Facilities Corporation, Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
Janitor (January /2001 – December/2004)
Duties: Cleaned washrooms, maintained floors; swept, vacuumed, mopped, dusted furniture, replenished supplies in the restrooms, washed windows, walls and ceilings, and picked up papers and other debris.

Scandinavia Building Maintenance, Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
Janitor (at airport) (April/1996 – January 2001)
Duties: Cleaned washrooms, maintained floors; swept, vacuumed, mopped, replenished supplies in the restrooms, buffed and waxed machines, dusted furniture, windows, shelves, cleaned basins and plumbing fixtures and performed related duties and responsibilities as required.

Landsdowne Shell, Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
Gas station attendant (February/1995-March/1997)
Duties: Provided courteous customer service, operated cash register, and maintained shift record and inventory.
 
OBJECTIVE

To obtain a challenging position where I'm able to apply my skills, abilities and interest in working with people.

Not much to correct really. I just changed the first line so it flows a little better.

Good job!
 
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