Please change some of the words and sentances to transform this paragraph from a grade C to an A. It is part of a story which I wrote for school.
Within minutes, the sound had gone from unbelievably loud to quiet. The wind whistled, but it wasn’t strong. Thing’s had changed rapidly within seconds. As Sam poked her head out of the basement, expecting to see her home, just over the fence to be damaged, destroyed, ruined, or perhaps even gone with bricks left scattered around the garden. She expected to see garden chairs, tables, everything missing. People stepped outside one by one. Everything was as Sam expected. People looked around, they didn’t cry, they were happy that they'd survived. Survived a horrifying few minutes of their lives.
Within minutes, the sound had gone from unbelievably loud to quiet. The wind whistled, but it wasn’t strong. Thing’s had changed rapidly within seconds. As Sam poked her head out of the basement, expecting to see her home, just over the fence to be damaged, destroyed, ruined, or perhaps even gone with bricks left scattered around the garden. She expected to see garden chairs, tables, everything missing. People stepped outside one by one. Everything was as Sam expected. People looked around, they didn’t cry, they were happy that they'd survived. Survived a horrifying few minutes of their lives.