Comments on my new poem...?

Roselmelody

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ok so here's my new poem. just read n' say what you think....

"My sleeping beauty"

Listening to the sorrow of sparrows I stand
And there you're lying on the ground
Like an innocent child so safe and sound
I lay over and hold your hand
I kiss your finger tips with tear flood
Something fills me like freezing blood
Those glorious glassy gleaming eyes
Are shut for good and my heart dies
I don't know why I escaped your stare
The love you had for me was rare
Your lips; I can hear the words unsaid
And yet you're lying in my arms, dead
Regret and pity fill me inside
I kiss you and I kill my pride
I would pour my soul in you like wine
Or suck the death out of your body to mine
But it's no use and I must give up
Cause my sleeping beauty will never wake up
 
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