Get more serious about your shoulders. Don't do tris with chest. I don't even recommend mixing groups.
chest, arms, rest, shoulders, back, rest, legs, rest.
Thats the winning combo.
I never actually do legs though because im lazy.
you might be able to pull a job at american eagle or something, but I don't know about modeling. you know what you're doing with the working out and it shows, I think you lack the facial structure, and unless you're a lot taller than you appear, it probably wont happen for the fashion world. you could always be a fitness model if you keep up on the dieting and working out though
Just because you have visible abs doesn't mean you could model. I have visible abs. I'm sure 50% of the kids on here look just like you, except not as ugly.