Could someone please Critique these first few paragraphs of my story?

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January 23, 2023. I awoke to the sound of my alarm ringing. Sluggishly I sat up and looked at the time 04:30, the usual time things got started around here. Where is “here” you ask? The new military base, named Stinton after Sarah Stinton, the first woman president. She was elected in 2017 after Barack Obama’s final term ended. Her strict policies eventually led to her assassination in 2018.
The base was located in Centralia Pennsylvania, a city which has been abandoned since the late 60’s due to coals in the mines underneath the city burning. We chose an abandoned city to remain secret from the newly risen Adheer Empire. The Adheer empire was ruled by a Chinese man named Shou Li. Shou was a very strange ruler. He has done many amazing things to China. He has Implemented democracy and even made Christianity a more practiced religion in most areas. He has done what America has been unable to do and all in a matter of 6 years! While he has made great change he has recently been somewhat tyrannical. Last month he declared war on the United States due to his newfound dream of making china the world power.
That is where we come in, The 4th Tribune. The tribune was a highly advanced group of soldiers trained in almost every aspect of warfare that has ever been practiced by our ancestors. We were able to adapt to any environment, counter any attacks, and strategize attacks to overtake our enemies in an almost effortless manner...

this is all ive got so far its kinda crappy but ive only been writing a few mins and its late lol i just need to know how its going so far before i continue on
any and all constructive critisism is welcome and greatly appreciated.
 
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