could you see if my novel is nice? this is the main plot...?

Cindy

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hello..writting a novel... its about illegal malaysian immigrants who move to germany because of famine.. they try to survive but world war 2 breaks out and 3 of them (the brother, sister, mother) is sent to a concentration camp. the mother dies in an accident. and its kinda dramatic because after the mother dies the last sentence of the chapter goes lyk this, 'and that was the last time i saw anyone with an alabaster skin as beautiful as mom'. and then the brother and ssiter try to survive and try to escape the hell-hole... they find a truck that carries dead bodies out of the camp. so they play dead but in the middle of escaping, the brother and sister gets seperated... and then they grow up (the sister in malaysia and the brother in africa because the brother gets adopted). the brother thinks that the sister is dead and gives up but the sister keeps on her search for the brother... then they meet each other in an accident. they fall in love and get married. but the sister gets sick and on her death bed she realizes they are actual brother and sisters.. she dies in the end, and the brother goes to a sea for a walk and says, "alexandria (the sister), when you are born again, you can be an old grandmother, a guy, a baby... just dont be born as my sister again."

so this is basically my plot. about brother-sister's touching love that turns into unexpected romance. it may be stupid, but pls dont comment meanly! the title is 'a love that never was', but i think its too corny...
 
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