Inspiration From A Candle
"A small single whick,
Burning a small single flame."
It makes me wonder how two simple things, such as a which and its flame can so dramatically change a person's mood as well as inspire.
The flame and its product of light, are seen as a signal of hope to the world. Such things make you realize how similar we all really are. In a way, we all have the same set of dreams and asperations. Everyone strives for success, we all hope to be understood. But yet, some how, that all gets lost in translation. We forget how alike we all are and bein to look to the differances amung people. We look at imperfections reather than actual perfections and potential.
To me, the whick and the flame that it burns represents the people of the world. The flame signifies our hopes, desires, dreams, and aspirations. While the whick represents the understanding, love, and acceptance we have for one another - when the whick burns out, the flame no longer exists.
--i'm not asking for a critique on my spelling, i'm asking for a critique on my writing skills.
*thanks ya'll
"A small single whick,
Burning a small single flame."
It makes me wonder how two simple things, such as a which and its flame can so dramatically change a person's mood as well as inspire.
The flame and its product of light, are seen as a signal of hope to the world. Such things make you realize how similar we all really are. In a way, we all have the same set of dreams and asperations. Everyone strives for success, we all hope to be understood. But yet, some how, that all gets lost in translation. We forget how alike we all are and bein to look to the differances amung people. We look at imperfections reather than actual perfections and potential.
To me, the whick and the flame that it burns represents the people of the world. The flame signifies our hopes, desires, dreams, and aspirations. While the whick represents the understanding, love, and acceptance we have for one another - when the whick burns out, the flame no longer exists.
--i'm not asking for a critique on my spelling, i'm asking for a critique on my writing skills.
*thanks ya'll