Do these sound like well rounded characters?

TheRealLilyBeals

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Okay, so I'm not going to blow up at anyone, just try to make your comments like "You're effort is good but maybe try to improve on your ____ by ___ good luck!"

Lily Beals
Age 12
Nicknames: Loopy Beals, Beals on Wheels (By Jared)
Lily is a lot like me. She is not labeled and doesn't believe people should be labeled. She hates seeing friends in danger. She is protective and tries to stay positive. She is bubbly when she wants to be. She is also very paranoid as you will see by the books. She is hard to figure out and her loyalty is one of her great qualities.
Lily has a copper shag haircut, Her bangs are always in her eyes and won't stay flat. She has green eyes. She is short and thin. She isn't 'Ms Pretty in Pink' She's more of a hot topic or Forever21 dresser.

Margret "Maggie" Watson
Age: 12
Nicknames: Megan, Morgan, Mildred, Maddie, Madison
Maggie is a total clown! ?Se has a sarcastic sense of humor and was modeled after a dear friend. Maggie has auburn stringy, poofy shoulder length hair. She has pasty skin and freckles on her nose. She has braces so when she talks her voice sounds rather odd. She's also bubbly and fun. She hates Kai and Jared dearly. Her favourite word is "Dingletwirp" which her sister made up and told her it will make her sound cool when a person disses her. Although Maggie hasn't got the idea that she lied. She thinks it means idiot.

Cepheus Densmore
Age 12
Nicknames: Filth (Sadie) Seepiss (Everyone) Elvis (Lily & Maggie)
Cepheus has dirty blond/light brown curly hair, dimples, hazel eyes, and is always smiling, even when he's crying, although he's probably the most serious person you'll ever meet. He likes to avoid school drama and doesn't care much for sports. He is witty and a very sharp boy. His type is rare to find in a boy; caring, sensitive, smart, thinks people are immature, etc. He is short in height and has two little birthmarks on his face. (He was also modeled after a dear friend)

Sadie Lavenge
Age 12
Nicknames: Dumb Blond (Jared) Paris Hilton (Jared) Wannabe (Maggie)
So guys have heard of those stuck up blonds correct? Cheerleader? Pretty in pink? Named Ashley or Brittany? Well Sadie makes fun of cheerleaders, hates pink, and who names a kid Sadie anyway? So Sadie is your more original stuck up blond. She thinks money buys happiness. Her parents don't care about her and hit her with a stick when she yells. She hates Lily and her friends. She doesn't like people to look at her as, 'the innocent little twelve year old." She hates being underestimated, a characteristic with both Sadie and Lily share. She has blond light hair, pale skin, very pale. Blue shiny eyes. She is slim and tall. Her expression is usually as if she tasted something rather bitter and she also grits her teeth and sneers a lot.

Kai Mathews (He's a boy, okay?!)
Age: 12
Nicknames: Aids Burger, (Long story)
Kai is misunderstood. When Kai first came to their school when he was 11, he was cool, funny and down to earth but when he met a boy who is a terrible influence named Jared, his life turned upside down. I wouldn't call Lily and Kai friends- but they were certainly fond of each other at one point. Lily liked Kai, but someone told Kai that Lily liked him right in front of Jared so that made him look bad. So he started dissing Lily and talking crap about her. When Lily wasn't thinking at all, she stalked him by email, which I don't suggest you do to your crush. She wishes she never did it but she wanted to talk to him, but not as Lily. Kai's parents are divorced, he goes to his mom one week then his dad another. Kai's dad's a drunk. He has a girlfriend and sets a bad example on him. Then his mom is pregnant and has a boyfriend. Kai is tall. He has dark brown hair. Mocha brown eyes, which is one of his best traits. Pale skin, and he also has buck teeth when he laugh. He really should get braces. He wears a large sweatshirt over his uniform very sloppily. He is also very quiet and unemotional with teachers, but with Jared and others he has a big mouth.

Jared McCoy
Age is 12
Nicknames: Creampuff (don't ask! lol)
Jared has golden hair, hazel eyes, and a HUGE mouth. He is medium height is very rare to get a long with. Even Kai can't debate that. He is nice over email and messenger's and stuff like that. But in person he is a total idiot, of as Maggie prefers, 'Dingletwirp.' He is why the class is so loud and annoying. He is also gross minded.
 
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