Do you like my super lame poem? lol.?

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i wrote this in like a minute. be rude if you must, idc.
Torture
I feel it, tearing up my heart
Trying to kill me.

Why can’t you see that I hate it?
Just stop already.

You say you like me, how can I tell?
You treat other girls better than me.
I’m the one you should want to show and tell
Your friends about. Not her.

If you don’t like me, leave me.
I don’t want to be a burden.
If you do like me, talk to me.
Show some respect.

At least hug me or look me in the eyes.
I want to feel loved, wanted. Cared for.

I feel it every day when I see you with her.
She’s not your girlfriend, I AM!

You are so blind. Open your eyes.
And see me dying when you do that.



i think its a poem. hah.
 
Cool! Seriously. Poems are like that, should be - just whatever we wanna write. There's no so-called right or wrong.

I like you style.

And just curious, so are you writing to a particular someone... hmmm...P

May you be loved and appreciated. Always =)
 
I think I it's a poem too :P lol
You're good. You're really good (not joking!)
 
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