do you think my song lyrics are good?

[bloominghearts]

this song keeps on playing in my head along with another song. the melody in my head for this song that i'm going to write the lyrics for keeps on playing the melody of a piano in my head. oh yea and before i get started i just want to say that i'm only 12 years old.

oh life is like a puzzle
you won't get through it until you see that it is done
so live
life to the fullest
this is your destiny
time to make things come true
so live life to the fullest
you never know where you will go
whatever you do just show
that you're willing to reach for stars
make your dreams a success
and live life to the fullest

 

[MreMan1]

its pretty good
i know i would have never been able to come up with that lol