do you think this is a good Preface for the book im writting?

Radom

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just keep in mind i am only 12 and i have 50 pages done in the book.

Everything around us was falling; the sight was beautiful and terrifying at the same time. like one of those too realistic dreams you don’t want to wake up from. But I had to remind myself that this was reality and was far more dangerous than a simple dream.
I tried to protect the people, to move objects away so it wouldn’t hit them; it was impossible. But I didn’t understand why I felt like this whole thing was my fault, what had I done wrong? Then as I ambled hurriedly, a piece of glass cut very deeply into my arm and blood rushed across my skin.
 
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