Does My Anime Drawing Look Retarded?

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"Hikari Hanazono" Hugging "Kei Takashima" From "Special A".

http://animezvidmaker.deviantart.com/art/Hikari-Hanazono-143199543

A Thought I'd Try A New Style Of Drawing:

http://animezvidmaker.deviantart.com/art/Devil-Spriten-Cat-145562044

This Is "Yumemi Hidaka" From "Munto":

http://animezvidmaker.deviantart.com/art/Yumemi-Hidaka-145562216

(BE HONEST!) pleeease...(If There Are No Links Just Copy and Paste Into The Adress Bar)
 
I expected a totally different kind of an expression on Hikari in the first picture... her eyes ruin the effect of the overall feel.

In Devil Spriten Cat, the cat's right hand seems a bit small considering the wrist size.

Yumemi Hidaka was quite good although I didn't understand much past the neck... Sorry, but I was straining my own to see it at the right angle.

Overall the pictures have a very professional quality akin to anime on a closer basis than most American art I've seen seems to come. It's certainly better than mine, if that's a consolation. You may want to consider digital rendering of your pencil work, or at least inking it in.

These are but details. I found everything else to be very pleasing, and there were no other distractions. You asked for problems so I nitpicked. No hard feelings intended.
 
mentally????

umm the second is wonky but the others are really nice
 
they're good, but they look 'unfinished'. Colours and thicker line would do the trick.
 
I think they look awesome, try colouring them in :D
(i'm now a watch on your deviantart. (: )
 
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