Does this introduction have a good thesis?

[HunterSantiago]

Each and every year in the United States, countless numbers of students are moving ahead to the next grade. In a nation that focuses heavily on education, this is seen as a superbly, progressive act. However, there is a downside to this. Many students are being given grades they do not deserve and moving to the next grade level without actually completing the standards required to do so. This hurts more than just the student and should never be done.
It is an argumentative essay against no child left behind

 

[nikki]

Is this your thesis statement?

Many students are being given grades they do not deserve and moving to the next grade level without actually completing the standards required to do so.

Yes, if you plan to explain why it hurts the student

 

[SaltandPeppy]

I don't see a clear thesis here. What is the overall question you are asking with your paper? Your thesis will answer that question.