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Bonjourt1

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my poem

Why Do I Try

I feel a connection, he says were just friends
He shows me feelings he doesn’t intend
I look into those eyes, and I just melt
If he only knew the way that I felt

He passes me by, I breathe a sigh
Not of relief, but of all of the grief
I say hello, just to say goodbye
If he doesn’t notice me
Then why do I try.

This story isn’t over
It never will be
I foresee the future
Him holding hands with me

I keep at a distance
I close my eyes
No matter how hard I try
I can’t see past his disguise

He passes me by, I breathe a sigh
No longer from grief, now for relief
He says hello, now I say goodbye
Now I’m glad he doesn’t notice
I’m glad I don’t try

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