english story intro ? ( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HELP!!)?

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have to write a story in first person for english and I know exactly what i want to write about but i can not think of an intro, any ideas I am open to ANYTHING!! The story's about this 17 yr old girl who lives in Huntington Beach-CA, w/ her parents and 4 siblings. She loves to surf and has been surfing pretty much since the day she could walk. She at the beach surfing pretty much any minute and chance she gets. Its so Relaxing, peaceful and her number 1 stress reliever, Its her life. But with the "The Billabong Surfing America Prime" coming up its been stressful, the pressure's starting to kick in, and the one thing she loved, that used to be so relaxing, stress free, and fun is now starting to feel more like a job then her idea of fun.


what do you think, any ideas? PLEASEE HELP!!!
 
Start with her surfing for fun. That way the reader gets her enjoyment of surfing right away.
 
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