Health Paper, Hilarity Ensues

[KatH]

Pretty much for 8th grade health I had to type this paper as a final. Note the teacher comments on the rubric. Some of them are especially troubling.

For those who can't read, the teacher's writing says :

Jake,
You're a great kid with a great sense of humor. I think your humor got the best of you this time. Your last page was very inappropriate. We often joke when we are uncomfortable. We all do. If you ever need to discuss these issues in the future you know where to find me. Unfortunately, you need to take the consequence and accept your "9". It's been nice having you in class.

 

[PS3player]

Meh, whats funny is that you're in 8th grade.

 

[thecrazyb133]

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[JonaU]

i lol'd i wish i would of wrote and awesome paper like that

good paper JAKE!!!

 

[shche23]

Lol! When I first glanced @ the teacher coments, I thought it said "You're a great kid with a great sexual hunger."
Lulz

 

[xxpreetiixx]

IMHO

Epic lulz :tup:

 

[ER5]

Hahaahaah Cleveland Steamer!

 

[Jonasluvr815]

i dont think this is yours. sorry

 

[CalinW]

lol i enjoyed it

 

[KaylaWayla]

surprised you got a C-

 

[FrightFilmFan]

can you tell me what the teacher wrote?

 

[stac3y120]

If people begin to doubt that this is in fact authentically my paper I'll take a photograph of myself holding it in front of a sign of my name or my face or something

 

[LynlZ]

Nice going. :crash:

 

[scouseprincess]

yeah can you translate the teachers' writing?

 

[peachie]

u got a fucking C+ on that PAPER!
lucky

 

[frank21142226]

Squirrel Master;45817227']There was nothing funny about that...

 

[MairaR]

i added a translation

 

[xXxAngelxXx]

Thats a damn cool teacher to give you a c after reading the last page!

 

[JoshA]

this is way funnier than caraboose's paper.

 

[Fluffy]

What is that encryption stating on your minor novel?