Help! Please critque my essay introduction for "stereotyping". EASY 10 POINTS?

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Help! Please critque my essay introduction for "stereotyping". EASY 10 POINTS?

Hey pro english writers, i need your help! please give tips on my grammar and whether what i am saying is logical and understandable. Thanks!!

"In today’s society, there are stereotypes for almost any groups that individuals belong to. At some point in any person’s life, they would have experienced stereotyping. For instance, it is often said that all African Americans are good at basketball, males are more aggressive than females, Lawyers are deceitful, and the list goes on. Stereotypes are so wide spread and used so often that they seem to be a natural behaviour for human beings. (Kassin, Fein, & Markus, 2008) So, what is stereotyping? Why do we categorize individuals into groups? How do stereotypes form? Are all stereotypes accurate summations of groups? These are some of the questions that are discussed in this essay. The purpose of this essay is to give a clear explanation of stereotyping. There is a discussion of a particular incident of stereotyping, and this incident is applied to theories relating to stereotyping. Finally, comments are given on the effectiveness of the theories of stereotyping. "
 
The first half is good, but after that, you explain exactly what you are going to do for too long. Make it two sentences if possible. Also you may want to add some "good stereotypes" in your list of them, too give your essay another level of depth. And stereotyping seeming to be a natural behavior is an evolved behavior that occurs in all of us in at least a subconscious level . It is what it is. Do not make it vague by adding seem.
 
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