...great to use? After everyone left and the girls were put to sleep Jessica sat out on the terrace for some fresh air. Still shaken from all that had happened she tried to think about happy things. A smile appeared on lily's face, she thought about happy things and thought about shopping about everything and didn’t’ hear B come up behind her.
There was nothing like watching a sunset. The sun just began to rise. She was happy B was there to share the moment with her. It was beautiful enough to make her forget lily's overdose. It looked like the sun was exploding over the horizon and dousing the surroundings with intense light. She held a breath for a second, she never really noticed how beautiful it was. She felt warmth not because of sunset but because of B.
(rewrite it for the better and u win hehe or just give me tips)
There was nothing like watching a sunset. The sun just began to rise. She was happy B was there to share the moment with her. It was beautiful enough to make her forget lily's overdose. It looked like the sun was exploding over the horizon and dousing the surroundings with intense light. She held a breath for a second, she never really noticed how beautiful it was. She felt warmth not because of sunset but because of B.
(rewrite it for the better and u win hehe or just give me tips)