How can I make this sentence more interesting?

LoneWolfK

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I am writing my essay about how three people gave more rights to their people. My first sentence of my introduction says "Civil rights are an essential part of society." and then I continued saying that there were some groups of people who weren't receiving equal treatment and how the three people helped them.



How can I make that sentence more attention-grabbing?

Thanks
 
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