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Jean had just finished her rather large hamburger. She left Catherine’s house early in the morning, she could hardly sleep after the fight with Catherine. She took a sip of her soda and leaned against the glass wall. She hated herself for lying about Johnny, she knew Catherine would never let them be together. Jean’s heart felt heavy with guilt she looked up and saw Anna’s shapely legs under her mini skirt. “Hello Jean.” Said Anna.
Jean had just finished her rather large hamburger. She left Catherine’s house early in the morning, she could hardly sleep after the fight with Catherine. She took a sip of her soda and leaned against the glass wall. She hated herself for lying about Johnny, she knew Catherine would never let them be together. Jean’s heart felt heavy with guilt she looked up and saw Anna’s shapely legs under her mini skirt. “Hello Jean.” Said Anna.