How do you write a good Introduction with a thesis statement on Helen...

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...Keller being a hero? so i have a hero project due soon and i need to write an introduction & thesis statement to prove that Helen Keller is a persistent, intelligent and self-confident person.

this is my thesis, but i think it's not good.
; There are many critical claims of Helen Keller not being a Intelligent, Persistent, and self-confident hero.

can anyone help me?
okay, here's what i got so far.

; Helen Keller is a modern day hero, and a legend for the vision impaired, but there are many critical claims of Helen Keller not being a Intelligent, Persistent, and self-confident hero.
OKAY, (:

SO RIGHT NOW.
I NEED THE THREE TOPICS.

I. PERSISTANT;
2. INTELLIGENT;
3. SELF-CONFIDENT;

those are the three topics i have to
proof that helen keller is a hero in modern day life.

& i need to explain them.
i just need a sentence to start them off.
but i am brain dead.
 
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