how does my introduction against cloning sound?

[mytitanfan]

can you read and tell me how it sounds and if there should be any changes can you tell me where and how should it be anything helps

For years many scientists believed that cloning would never be possible. Until February of 1997, when it was introduced from the biotechnology firm PPL Therapeutics and the Roslin Institute of Edinburgh, Scotland had successfully cloned a Finn Dorset sheep named Dolly. Dolly was born on July 5, 1996. she was named after the country-western singer Dolly Parton. Dolly had the DNA of her source; making her the first mammal successfully cloned using adult cells. Dolly was put to sleep February 14, 2003 after doctors detected lung disease, though she had reached half the life span of a typical sheep. Scientists are now looking to human cloning. Some experts believe that cloning should not even be attempted, and I agree with them. My reason is because think of all the side effects of cloning. Do you really think cloned food is safe for your children to eat?

 

[Huhm]

well its very good but perhaps u cud qoute frm the newspaper that had that story theyusually have very good intro dont copy it but qoute it

 

[ericb]

No reason to say "my reason is because...." The reader already know this is an opinion piece.

some other topics for the talk:
cloning of humans may be worng to you. but, what about cloning pieces of humans. Like a soldier that loses an ear. Would it be ethical to be able to clone that and attach it to the soldier. Check out most the popular articles section today on yahoo news and read about stem cells. clonign doesn't just have to be about cloning humans.

A florida couple recently spen $150k to clone there pet lab retriever from a Korean company.