How to describe someone spitting...?

ANDREAQ

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Weird question I know but I have to get it right! It's got to be somewhat dramatic. I'll give you the paragraph before hand:
The man smiled and his devil wings fluttered. He knew she was apprehensive. He knew her body had came to a standstill. She wouldn't’t even bother to try to get out of his grasp. Safina just stood there, captivated; her fear taking over every hair, every pore, every cell in her body.
He spat in her black eyes. ______________?
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I don't know how to make it all dramatic from there.
Help please!
Tasukete kurete arigato!
That______
part is where I like you to if you can, help me describe her actions and how it felt
Jizen no okage de
 
He spat in her black eyes. She shuddered in horror and in enchantment.
 
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