im writing an essay about doctors. so i just need your opinion on my introduction paragraph. and it would be really nice if you gave me some more ideas or sentences i can add to it. so here it is:
Doctors are the ones you turn to at times of war,disasters,injuries,and diseases.They preserve and sustain life in those who are unfortunate.They help the wounded and enlighten our future.
Doctors are the ones you turn to at times of war,disasters,injuries,and diseases.They preserve and sustain life in those who are unfortunate.They help the wounded and enlighten our future.