How's the summary to my story?

mrmmmmmm

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I want to make sure it sounds okay, interesting, and NOT confusing. Thanks...

Emily Kalemyn wasn't expecting something she wanted to ever happen, especially when she hadn't exactly meant it. But when she finds herself thrown into a new time and place, lost of how she ever got there, her life changes for the good, or maybe even for the worst.

There she meets Jesse, the guy who saves her from the drunken Rodney, and also the guy who tells her she has somehow gone back to 1957. After quickly fainting from shock and waking up in her normal time, she quickly becomes curious of how to go back, and after succeeding with the discovery of her jacket's abilities, her whole new life starts. Hanging with Jesse, falling in love, and getting the whole nostalgic experience may seem like a dream, at least until Rodney comes back into the picture, and starts jeopardizing everything Emily has come to love. Not only that, but she soon comes to find that time doesn't like to stay in tact when it's messed with.

And with two things complicating the relationship she's become attached to, the decision of life and love is a lot tougher than she had ever expected.


Here's the story if you want to check it out. Although keep in mind that I plan on editing quite a bit when Im finished:

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=10489
 
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