AddisonttPeYeTem
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- Apr 28, 2010
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I've just thought of another idea for a story,Here it is..Please give me NICE but honest feedback:
A 16 year old girl is in high school,And there she hangs with the sophmores in high school..They all end up going on a long and big road trip,And stay in hotels for a few weeks..It turns out,The older kids don't like this 16 year old girl,{Still can't think of a name for her..But hell,I just now thought of it}..And they give her drugs and vodka,They try and get her hooked,So she will have a miserable life. {Horrible,I know..}
And at the hotel room,She overdoses,And dies..BUT THEN,She has a second chance at life,Except as a different person,But she looks,acts,talks,and is almost EXACTLY alike as she originally was..The same thing that originally happened to her,Happens to a boy in the new high school she gose to,And so on...
Is that good? Please give me feedback..But,Don't be a jackass..
Thanks
Ahh..Spelling mistake!:
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A 16 year old girl is in high school,And there she hangs with the sophmores in high school..They all end up going on a long and big road trip,And stay in hotels for a few weeks..It turns out,The older kids don't like this 16 year old girl,{Still can't think of a name for her..But hell,I just now thought of it}..And they give her drugs and vodka,They try and get her hooked,So she will have a miserable life. {Horrible,I know..}
And at the hotel room,She overdoses,And dies..BUT THEN,She has a second chance at life,Except as a different person,But she looks,acts,talks,and is almost EXACTLY alike as she originally was..The same thing that originally happened to her,Happens to a boy in the new high school she gose to,And so on...
Is that good? Please give me feedback..But,Don't be a jackass..
Thanks
Ahh..Spelling mistake!:
*Goes