Alright.
I only have about 10 chapters as of yet, but I am constantly working on it.
Feel free to read what I have so far, but that isn't what I'm asking of you.
Between chapters 4 and 5, should there be another chapter to kind of give the sense of passing time?
Like, if there should, I'd change chapter 5 to one that shows the passing of time and push the ORIGINAL chapter 5 to chapter 6, and so on.
Y'all understand?
If not, just say so and I'll try to explain again as best as I can.
Now, if y'all want, and it would be greatly appreciated if y'all did, y'all can comment and tell me what you think so far of my story.
CONSTRUCTIVE. CRITICISM. ONLY.
Nothing that's going to make me want to cry, though.
Y'all always give me wonderful advise when it comes to my work in progress, and I thank y'all.
=]
Here's the link
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=14424
Remember to answer the first question that I asked.
Yes, I asked this question yesterday, and I trust that person's opinion that answered it to a T, but I want more than just one opinion.
All feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on my work in progress is appreciated, but it isn't what I'm after. But, feel free to tell me what you think.
Thank y'all =]
Nothing mean, please.
I only have about 10 chapters as of yet, but I am constantly working on it.
Feel free to read what I have so far, but that isn't what I'm asking of you.
Between chapters 4 and 5, should there be another chapter to kind of give the sense of passing time?
Like, if there should, I'd change chapter 5 to one that shows the passing of time and push the ORIGINAL chapter 5 to chapter 6, and so on.
Y'all understand?
If not, just say so and I'll try to explain again as best as I can.
Now, if y'all want, and it would be greatly appreciated if y'all did, y'all can comment and tell me what you think so far of my story.
CONSTRUCTIVE. CRITICISM. ONLY.
Nothing that's going to make me want to cry, though.
Y'all always give me wonderful advise when it comes to my work in progress, and I thank y'all.
=]
Here's the link
http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=14424
Remember to answer the first question that I asked.
Yes, I asked this question yesterday, and I trust that person's opinion that answered it to a T, but I want more than just one opinion.
All feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on my work in progress is appreciated, but it isn't what I'm after. But, feel free to tell me what you think.
Thank y'all =]
Nothing mean, please.