I need help in writing my introduction.?

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Nena

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Im doing a compare and contrast paper for english and i was wondering how to begin my introduction my topic is Alice in wonderland by both tim Burton and Walt Disney. I need help!!!! please! i Thank those who give supporting and helpfull comments.
 
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sara

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Alice chases a white rabbit down a hole and ends up in a magical world. Alice in Wonderland is a great story by both Tim Burton and Walt Disney. There are a lot of similarities between the two, and there are also a lot of differences.
 
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BobbySue:D

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Well the beginning of the intro should always be a "hook", or something that will get people's attention, such as a quote, a surprising statistic, a question, or an anecdote (a short story). For example, you could quote an important scene from one of the movies, or a statistic of the gross incomes of both of the movies.

You could give a short summary of the movies to introduce them somewhere in the intro.

Lastly, you should have a thesis statement (main idea sentence) that is the the LAST sentence of your intro paragraph. For example, you could say "Alice in Wonderland by Walt Disney is different from the one done by Tim Burton because....." and list a couple examples that you will further expand upon in the body of your essay.

Hope this helps! Good luck :)
 
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