what I did wrong? (catherine forbid johnny to see Jean but he didn't listen now she will find out he cheated)
Catherine's heart was beading harder then ever as she ran to the last step. She hoped Johnny was alone and not with Jean. Catherine braced herself to be crushed. Her fears were true Johnny and Jean were wrapped in each others arms dancing. Jean closed her eyes feeling Johnny inch closer. He puckered up ready to kiss Jean one more time.
(rewrite this for the better and win or give me tips)
Catherine's heart was beading harder then ever as she ran to the last step. She hoped Johnny was alone and not with Jean. Catherine braced herself to be crushed. Her fears were true Johnny and Jean were wrapped in each others arms dancing. Jean closed her eyes feeling Johnny inch closer. He puckered up ready to kiss Jean one more time.
(rewrite this for the better and win or give me tips)
