If you picked up a book and had this on the back would you consider reading it?

[dancergrrl]

My name is Sky, and I am technically a slave. But I am more powerful than my master, dragon keeper that he may be. My skin is currently red, pink, purple, and orange. All the colors of the lovely sunset. My mood is one of regret for the passing day. This is my blessing, my curse. A spell wrought by mistake. Or so I am told. As we travel and look for the missing dragons, questions stir in my mind. I do not believe I have been told everything. A piece of the puzzle is missing, and can only be explained by the impossible...

what do you think? i'll try and answer questions without giving too much away
i haven't named it yet, but i was thinking something along the lines of Dragon Sky. not the best, but it works so far

 

[mpeaceeloveetwilightm]

I think I would...it sounds really interesting!

 

[CornFlakes1]

seems okay, but I think you gave a lot away. it kind of makes me want to put the book back on the shelf.

 

[tonks]

Sounds interesting. The skin colors bored me a bit but after that it was really good! I really would read it!

 

[EyeOfTheWorld]

i fell asleep like 15 times while reading that...nah it's not that bad, just use less bland words. If i saw that in a book store, I would probably send hate mail to the publisher.

 

[Mum]

I would definately read the book, just to see what happens! It looks intense.

what is it called?!?!?!

 

[CornFlakes1]

seems okay, but I think you gave a lot away. it kind of makes me want to put the book back on the shelf.

 

[Mum]

I would definately read the book, just to see what happens! It looks intense.

what is it called?!?!?!

 

[RosalieCullen1]

yeah!! i love stories where animals can tell the story like that!

 

[burberryniche]

just cut out the first sentence.

 

[taylordufrene]

no thanks