Okay, so, if you were in your local book store and opened up a book that began with this opening sentence:
As the water pulled us under, and the ripping cold wrenched us downward, I realized that I loved him.
Would you be interested enough to continue reading it?
Also, what about it catches your attention or doesn't?
As the water pulled us under, and the ripping cold wrenched us downward, I realized that I loved him.
Would you be interested enough to continue reading it?
Also, what about it catches your attention or doesn't?