soccerchic
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edit so thanks first timers!!? Here it is...... (All feedback is welcome negative or positive)
I gritted my teeth and closed my eyes. Surprisingly with all of the mayhem around me, the scorching heat of a open flame on my bare arm, my body crushed under a mountain of rubble, and my last grain of hope gone, I was able to think clearly. During the last moments of the insanity, I realized I had this coming. We all do, As humans we deserve every last drop of devastation in our lives, and no matter how much good we do, that will never change. So as I lay on the cold ground, I looked at the world through my salty tears and took my last breath before the real madness would begin.
I am a teenager writing this, so my writing may be underdeveloped. Please no need to spare my feelings its just some words and at this point they don't mean alot to me yet so I want to make them the best I can!
Please post if you would read this if this was a book, and feel free to post links to your questions I would love to help out.
I gritted my teeth and closed my eyes. Surprisingly with all of the mayhem around me, the scorching heat of a open flame on my bare arm, my body crushed under a mountain of rubble, and my last grain of hope gone, I was able to think clearly. During the last moments of the insanity, I realized I had this coming. We all do, As humans we deserve every last drop of devastation in our lives, and no matter how much good we do, that will never change. So as I lay on the cold ground, I looked at the world through my salty tears and took my last breath before the real madness would begin.
I am a teenager writing this, so my writing may be underdeveloped. Please no need to spare my feelings its just some words and at this point they don't mean alot to me yet so I want to make them the best I can!
Please post if you would read this if this was a book, and feel free to post links to your questions I would love to help out.