I'm writing a autobiography about my online life of a shy girl and can't...

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...find a moral to it? For English class, I'm writing my autobiography on my experiences online. In the autobiography, I put heavy emphasis on my making friends like me online even though I'm shy in person. I wrote how my life changed: I developed a passion for learning, different cultures, and life in general. However, at the end people are so against getting so close to people online, that I eventually have to leave.

The story is however, lacking a theme, at least that I see. What is the morale that readers could learn from my experiences? Thanks.
first answer: awesome! :p
I tried to make everything about it funny; otherwise it'd just be lame lol I had to get serious at the end though.
 
There isn't a good one.

Not to be too much of a jerk but unless you decide to include some satire, or rather dry humor, it's just going to make you sound naive and socially awkward if you say that the internet is how you "developed a passion for learning, different cultures, and life in general."

If all you care about is grade then it does not matter what you say but if you want your teacher (or at least the grader) to take you seriously in future endeavors you can not tell them that being on your computer is what made you appreciate life more fully.

Sorry for my rudeness but I have more than a little experience grading college lit. class papers and can tell you for a fact that is what 99.7% of people who read your paper will think.
 
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