Introduction paragraph help.?

TheGster

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can somesone tell me a intro paragraph on the the topic of energy drinks and how they are bad for you?
 
Energy drinks have affected children, teens, and adults since the very beginning. Although they may taste good and give one a burst of energy, they are not good for anyone. They are full of sugar and carbohydrates. *Too many energy drinks are bad for one and can cause obesity, lack of energy over time, and ...*

* This sentence is called a thesis sentence. In your thesis statement you state what you are trying to prove, and then three reasons why.

-Remember not to use the words you or I.
 
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