I did a quiz about her, and the quiz said she is. I've never really thought of her as a Mary Sue, so I though it'd seek another opinion. Here is some information on her:
Her name's Amelia, she's 16 years old. She loves to swim, average weight but very pale and is insecure because of it. She has really blue eyes but doesn't really care what she looks like.
She's excellent in pretty much all academic subjects at school because her tutor would constantly drill her. She loves to laugh, only she can't really make jokes herself.
As the story progresses, she becomes more broken inside. She doesn't want to love anyone for fear that she'll lose them. She becomes suicidal at one point, and hates the thought that she owes anyone anything.
Soo, yeah. Is it necessarily bad if she is a Mary Sure? I mean, what I'm writing is a romance, generally I write fantasy stories but I wanted something different and a break before I went back to writing fantasy.
@cathrl69 I see what you mean about the pale thing and not caring how she looks, I'll have to change that, thanks.
She has a tutor because she used to be homeschooled, her tutor is like their housekeeper too, so she still drills her and stuff.
I said as the story progresses, so I mean she falls in love with a guy, but then something happens and then she becomes broken. I have a reason why she's suicidal and afraid of losing people, I just don't want to post it her in case it gets stolen. Thanks though!
@Arlene F I see what you mean, I guess I'm not really going to worry anymore if she's a Mary Sue because I like her just the way she is. Thanks!
Her name's Amelia, she's 16 years old. She loves to swim, average weight but very pale and is insecure because of it. She has really blue eyes but doesn't really care what she looks like.
She's excellent in pretty much all academic subjects at school because her tutor would constantly drill her. She loves to laugh, only she can't really make jokes herself.
As the story progresses, she becomes more broken inside. She doesn't want to love anyone for fear that she'll lose them. She becomes suicidal at one point, and hates the thought that she owes anyone anything.
Soo, yeah. Is it necessarily bad if she is a Mary Sure? I mean, what I'm writing is a romance, generally I write fantasy stories but I wanted something different and a break before I went back to writing fantasy.
@cathrl69 I see what you mean about the pale thing and not caring how she looks, I'll have to change that, thanks.
She has a tutor because she used to be homeschooled, her tutor is like their housekeeper too, so she still drills her and stuff.
I said as the story progresses, so I mean she falls in love with a guy, but then something happens and then she becomes broken. I have a reason why she's suicidal and afraid of losing people, I just don't want to post it her in case it gets stolen. Thanks though!
@Arlene F I see what you mean, I guess I'm not really going to worry anymore if she's a Mary Sue because I like her just the way she is. Thanks!