sophisticated? I had always lived with my parents; they determined each step of my life, and I obediently acceded.
(This is my first sentence of the paragraph.)
I was going to put.............Throughout my life, I had always lived with my parents; they determined each step of my life, and I obediently acceded.
(But then what I mean is that I used to live with my parents and did what they told me, but now I no longer live with my parents. I think using "throughout my life sounds contradicted")
(This is my first sentence of the paragraph.)
I was going to put.............Throughout my life, I had always lived with my parents; they determined each step of my life, and I obediently acceded.
(But then what I mean is that I used to live with my parents and did what they told me, but now I no longer live with my parents. I think using "throughout my life sounds contradicted")