The Russians fought long and hard for an equal, communist nation. The price was high and millions perished but in the end Russia survived. Russia went through many tragedies in the 19th century including World War I, the two-part Russian Revolution, and the Russian Civil War. The Russian Revolution was bound to happen but the Czar's incompetent moves in World War I was essentially the straw that broke the camels back. The February revolution replaced the tsar with the provisional government. The October revolution resulted in the replacement of the provisional government by the communist party of Bolsheviks. The Civil War occurred due to a large group that was unhappy with the Bolsheviks. The inevitability of the Russian Revolution of 1917 was caused by the inability of the Romanov to properly address the problems of the country, the lack of a viable middle class [brought on by industry in many ways], and the continued participation in unpopular wars.
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The Russians fought long and hard for an equal, communist nation. The price was high and millions perished but in the end Russia survived. Russia went through many tragedies in the 19th century including World War I, the two-part Russian Revolution, and the Russian Civil War. The inevitability of the Russian Revolution of 1917 was caused by the inability of the Romanov to properly address the problems of the country, the lack of a viable middle class [brought on by industry in many ways], and the continued participation in unpopular wars.
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The Russians fought long and hard for an equal, communist nation. The price was high and millions perished but in the end Russia survived. Russia went through many tragedies in the 19th century including World War I, the two-part Russian Revolution, and the Russian Civil War. The inevitability of the Russian Revolution of 1917 was caused by the inability of the Romanov to properly address the problems of the country, the lack of a viable middle class [brought on by industry in many ways], and the continued participation in unpopular wars.
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