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Is this a good introduction paragraph to my essay about "Cell phones should be banned in school?"?
“Put that cell phone away!†You hear that phrase mostly everyday in the classroom. Today, instructors have to ask students to put their cellular phones back into their bags and pay more attention to class. This begins to affect the learning environment in the classroom since it causes a lot of distractions. Students not only creating distraction from the cell phone, they also like to take pictures of random people with the built in camera. Some people do not like to have their pictures taken, but nevertheless students misuse these features and invades others privacy. Students that talk or text too much on their phone can cause themselves serious health damages. Therefore cell phones should be banned in school.Can you help me to make it better or give me some tips and advices? My main points are distraction, provacy, and health damages
“Put that cell phone away!†You hear that phrase mostly everyday in the classroom. Today, instructors have to ask students to put their cellular phones back into their bags and pay more attention to class. This begins to affect the learning environment in the classroom since it causes a lot of distractions. Students not only creating distraction from the cell phone, they also like to take pictures of random people with the built in camera. Some people do not like to have their pictures taken, but nevertheless students misuse these features and invades others privacy. Students that talk or text too much on their phone can cause themselves serious health damages. Therefore cell phones should be banned in school.Can you help me to make it better or give me some tips and advices? My main points are distraction, provacy, and health damages